Score: 10

"Beeautiful!"

submission: Dont Cry For Me

date: October 16, 2009

Looooooooooooove it ;)

Score: 8

"Yeeah"

submission: Now it's all on you

date: October 16, 2009

Hmmm maybe boost your beat upp a bit! Just seems pretty tame atm- at least ta me :P
And one thing I found I really wanted fromm it but didnt get was like a break it down hardcore dance moment Ahaha would be mean as!

But yeah its Hot! Especiallyy thee chorus. Heaps betta than some of the shit on MTV even haa Lovee your voices!

God Bless x

;)

Score: 3

"Sorryy mate"

submission: DBZ Parody Saiyans Paradise

date: October 16, 2009

No, just no.

Score: 7

"Brace yourself for my intense review! ;)"

submission: Wyze - Tears of a Child

date: October 14, 2009

Like the tune and sort of like the idea although its pretty depressing haha.

Maybe strengthen and roughen up the beat to give it more edge? Especially at the chorus.

And I agree with B-RadGfromOV- reckon you needa work on the rapping- sounds a bit ... hard to explain... but almost sarcastic/sneery or like its mocking its own lyrics a bit...
Try listening to Linkin Park/Fort Minor- I think it would do better with a vocal style slightly more like theirs, but that's just my opinion.
And I think you were a bit off time in the first chorus- second one was better.

Also I think some singing and harmonising accompanying the chorus- just in the background- would make it sound even more awesome tooo.

And lastly (hopefully you're not sick of all my criticism by the time youve got to this part!) I reckon it would be sweet if nearing the end, the vocals sort of got less and less and kinda distorted- like the chorus repeated itself except missing bits out e.g. '... tears of a child... teartears of a child....... tears..... of a child...' if you know what i mean!

Yup- so don't have to take my advice, but yeeah AWESOME WORK mate!
And hope I helped!
Keeep it upp :)

Score: 10

"Sweeeeeeeeet!"

submission: -_Breeze_-

date: October 14, 2009

I think its sweet!
Was wondering if I could make lyrics and vocals for it...
Messaged you about that ;)

Score: 4

"Has Potential ;)"

submission: Gettin Loose

date: October 14, 2009

Liked the tune, beat and the 'Go!' :)

As for the rapping part ... you were quite outta time there, matey! This is definitely the main factor which brought my rating down hah sorryy... But I'm sure you can get it right with a bit of practise.. ;)

Also, you might wanna get a little bit more creative with your lyrics- especially with your chorus lyrics of 'Get loose... get loose' ... just to give it a little something more you know...

And finally, I think it would sound better if you made the chorus music more distinct- like make the tune/beat stronger. Cause that's how hiphop usually works.

So I reckon give it another shot and take my advice! ... but you don't have to... Hahaa

Score: 10

"Beeeautiful"

submission: Moments to remember

date: April 30, 2009

Would like to use it for my production. That cool with you? :)
N what name should I give the credit to?

Score: 10

"Haa"

submission: Tremolo Attack

date: April 30, 2009

I like it. Im gonna use it for my production. :)

Score: 10

"Inteeense"

submission: [F-777] Aqua Dream

date: April 30, 2009

Im gonna use it for my production. :)

Score: 7

"More critical than the rest.."

submission: .:THE PIANO:. [EN3RGIE]

date: April 15, 2009

thought the piano sounded pretty tacky and had no flow or proper tune tbh

liked the beats and ambience

and that person under me is weird